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PLEASE WRITE MORE!

"Great detail ! I feel like I am almost in the actual story, and have a clear picture of what's going on ! Please continue it ! I'm really interested in reading more of what happens to these characters! Your writing style is phenomenal, and the detail makes your story come to life !"

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Mary Grey

"A great read. I loved getting to know the character of Patricia Chambers, as well as her budding relationship with the warlock Edric. I think that the partnership between these two characters will be something interesting to read in the future."

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Shattered

"Loved the details and suspense to know what would happen next. Really need to get the full story and ending. I was just getting to know the character and feeling the story and it came to a pause with me needing to know what would happen to Patricia and I felt romance coming for her with this Stranger in the woods. I see more than Magic happening and I hope some love and romance. Colleen Bell"

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