Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Short and good
"Oh wow, that was a good story. Short, but really good written. Even the parts where to go into the future, their next chapters, you haven't lost the point. Keep going"
Blood and Bone
"Wow! I was completely spellbound by the writing and storyline. The style of writing was compelling and loudly conveyed the tension of the characters. Simply amazing storytelling!"
It could be great
"It jumps to much . You go from her finding him him telling her they need to talk and her following to talk then she knows what she is and he is poisoned and her bonding with him. I mean there is nothing in between. "
