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Very nice!

"This is the second story I read of this author. Short and sweet. Easy read. Thank you!"

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Short and sweet

"It was a sweet read. It could have been longer if more depth had been added like meeting her parents, the wedding, possibly her rubbing TLC's success in Joy's face, or possibly an investigation of their hiring practices. Just a thought. But seriously, for a short story it is good. "

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