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MIXED KIDS

"Loved it! You are right no one should ever explain their roots! My husband is black&white w brown hair, I'm white w red hair, when our son was born his skin was fair. He looked like a white child, everyone was asking & starring at us. It was really annoying! As he got older, his skin turned olive & his hair stayed the same, he has white ppl hair... It's brown w a strip of red & red highlights throughout. Just bc someone doesn't fully look a certain skin tone, doesn't mean they aren't of that race.. You should never judge a book by its cover! I loved your poetry, please continue writing! Speak the truth! Have a blessed day! "

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Brave monologue

"Hey Elisa, very brave of you to address this issue and speak up! I assume you live in the United States; since I’m not from there, this is an issue I’m not so familiar with and it was eye opening for me. It sounds like you really needed to get this off your chest and I think you did well. Do you plan to share this monologue also with the people in your environment? I think it might help you to deal with this better if the people around you know that it’s something you struggle with. Then they can perhaps support you. Anyway, I think you use language very well here, it really grabbed me. Keep writing!"

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