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"It is a great story. I liked it from the start. Capturing with its anticipation and intrigue. I especially like the questions that continue to come up into my mind. I feel the plot moved a bit too fast. Character development needs more focus ie: more background on the main character however that is where a good developmental edit will come in handy. Also, it needs line editing. Perhaps use an editor located on upwork.com. They are inexpensive and quite helpful. Overall the plot, character, action and intrigue are well done. I give it four stars for story style/creative imagination and mystery. Keep up the good work."

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