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Overall much better than Part 1. A darker version of MCU

"Hi, my man, I just read your story Pros It is very much better than Part 1. Liked the first interaction between the Avengers and the skrulls. The backstory you gave the skrulls was far better than we got in the original show. Chapter 6 was my favorite. The overall family dynamic was handled well. Liked the dynamic between Sam and Bucky. Your story does a great job of smoothly connecting to the broader MCU. And finally Every good character shines, it felt like each one had their own story. Cons Based on the overall plot, Chapter 5 felt a bit like filler to me. Overall Gravik was well written but i felt the connection of the first 2 scenes of the story in the beginning, that payoff near the end could have been better. Liked that Sharon and Hill had their pasts but I was expecting a bit more from that storyline, especially for Hill So that's it. It was a nice read! A big improvement. "

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