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Loved the story

"Very original and well written. Could have been more build up to the story. Maybe day two to introduce the daughter "

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Jake, Terri and Harriet

"I was really involved in the content and didn’t take time to comment on each chapter but Jake is probably still smiling after having Harriet ( niece) II believe she was a virgin . Please elaborate more as to how this develops and plays out with her making life decisions ."

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Very intoxicating

"A slow build-up to a very steamy ending! Very well thought out and open to a second book!"

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