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Nice

"Its thrilling.. Erotic... N gripping"

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Best one yet

"Best one yet post more chapters"

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This is super intense,funny,horny everything that I had been looking for

"This has everything that inhad been looking for"

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Funny & sizzling

"Good pass-time reading, funny and hot, rather long. I enjoyed it nevertheless. End it soon please. You're quirky and I love you, Alpha!"

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Hooked

"This story is very well written, so much so I can’t put it down. It’s exciting, tense and erotic. Very explicit. "

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Loving the book 🤩

"What I loved the most is the chemistry between them plus the plot and characters are just 🤌🏻✨💝 please don't stop writing and keep updating soon can't wait for next chapters. "

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Beauty in the boy’s room

"Not what I expected! Being about high school, I was expecting the usual high school bully drama, it’s more than that ...l’m loving the plot, the twist and Omg the surprises! If you thinking of reading this book- do it. "

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Xavier and Christian

"Loving the story please don’t stop writing. Very interesting!!!"

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Darkest Momo

"I've never wanted to read a book so much in my life 🤭 love love it. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us 😍 "

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WOW...

"I can't wait find out about the three of them doing stuff... it's getting really hot and exciting! I cant believe Xavier was the first to do something like that with her even before Christian...but I am liking the different parts of their personalities starting to surface. I know they instinctively stepped into their gendered roles when they're around her even with out fully understanding it in the beginning but also the fact that they are also drawn to her and the intrigue of her was thrilling. I loved how Christian will use his access to accommodate her feminine needs with privacy while Xavier, knowing she needs some $ to be free of the employment hold that Christian has over her will pay for it, and she gets to be around and do stuff with both of them is okay. I think. I really hope she survives the school because of these two and it somehow helps her family later on. I mean having two rich and very attractive boys wanting to be around her can be problematic but realistically, also advantageous for networking and access to resources her family currently do not have. "

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Beauty in the boys dorm

"I'm hooked it's like ecstasy on the phone it's literally everything I've been wanting to read."

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Love love love

"Loving the plot"

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Mrs Eby me

"Good read...lets go on"

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I like how she is handling them

"I like the way she is making friends I would recommend this book to dark romance readers I chose the rating because I felt like it was worth rating "

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..very interesting

"..I love it"

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Steady decline

"This piece started as something I got into and has gone to something that is poorly written and lacks any spark. The grammar is distracting and almost feels as if the other chapters weren’t written by the same person at this point. The issues are more than a few “wrong words” here or there. If the pervious chapters hasn’t caught my attention I would walk away. It’s that awful. I hope either the story wraps up or the writing improves. I’m not writing out of hatefulness. I’m generally curious what changed and why."

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