Chapter 1 — The Favored Witch
Shiluo had done everything right.
Two laurel leaves to cleanse the eyes. A smear of gold honey over the lips. Both hands washed in a silver basin of dew gathered across three nights, until moonlight seemed to tremble on her skin.
Only then could a witch light seven lamb-fat candles and stand before the Moon Goddess.
The little shrine smelled of wax, herbs, and warm sweetness. Seven flames burned softly in the dark, gilding the marble face of the Goddess where She reclined on a throne carved with laurel branches and forest beasts. Cat’s-eye gems glimmered in the statue’s eyes. In their fractured shine, Shiluo saw herself reflected a hundred times over—dark hair, bright face, the untrustworthy rise and fall of a human throat.
Under that divine gaze, her heart gave a hard, traitorous beat.
She pressed a hand to her chest and bowed lower.
The Goddess looked serene, radiant, impossibly clean. Shiluo, determined not to offend heaven at the last moment, held her breath and whispered with all the solemnity she could gather, “Great Goddess above, bless this pot, bless this hatch, let everything open smoothly and—”
A black blur flashed past.
One candle went out.
Shiluo jerked upright. Before she could turn, a second flame vanished. Then a third. Then a fourth. Darkness moved toward her in patient, silent bites, as if an invisible hand were pinching the light away one wick at a time.
Her scalp tightened.
Every prayer she had ever half-remembered from two lives crashed together in her mind. Buddha, saints, miracle workers, anybody with a professional interest in divine rescue. She spun, grabbed the heaviest thing within reach—a leather-bound volume of sacred hymns—and raised it like a weapon.
Then two green eyes blinked at her.
The cat looked deeply unimpressed.
“Miss Poppy,” Shiluo said through her teeth.
Candles flared back to life one by one.
In the far corner, a woman bent over laughing.
Amber never laughed delicately. She laughed with her mouth open, shoulders shaking, rich golden hair spilling down the front of a patchwork night robe so outrageous it looked assembled by a sleep-drunk queen and a magpie with a theft problem. Miss Poppy leaped lightly onto her shoulder, tail flicking. The cat wore exactly the same expression Amber did: amusement edged with insult.
“You looked too stiff,” Amber said. “I was helping.”
“You nearly sent me to the afterlife.”
“That would have been awkward. You’re using my cauldron.”
She flicked two fingers.
The crooked candles rose by themselves, straightened in the air, and glided back into place beside the altar. No chant. No ceremony. No visible effort. Magic moved around Amber as naturally as breath. A draft through a cracked window, a strip of moonlight across the floor, a bead of dew trembling on the sill—anything could become power in her hands.
Shiluo had watched that kind of effortless sorcery for years, and it still caught at something raw and greedy inside her.
This was supposed to be her world now.
Not the first one. Not the life she remembered only in jagged fragments—the smell of rain on city pavement, thin paper books, waiting for impossible letters, stories full of owls and hidden schools and children who discovered they had always belonged to magic. Those memories had broken apart long ago, scattered like glass under water. But they were enough. Enough that when she first realized this new world held witches, goddesses, rituals, and moon-fed power, she had accepted it with ridiculous eagerness.
At last, she had thought. At last.
The world had laughed right back.
On most days, Shiluo could almost pretend that was enough.
Miller Vale was hidden deep enough from the wider world that the Church did not bother it often and sensible men avoided it entirely. The village belonged to women, to herb gardens, to moon-marked lintels, to smoke curling from crooked chimneys at dusk. Girls grew up there under sharp eyes and stranger blessings. They learned how to dry fever bark, charm a knife against rust, read weather in silver light. They also learned very early that the Goddess gave no gifts without demanding shape in return.
Even so, Miller Vale was never entirely beyond rumor. Salt wives, wool traders, and herb buyers occasionally came up the mountain tracks carrying cloth, gossip, and the wider world’s mildew with them. That spring they had all repeated the same annoyance: the Church had begun sending silver riders farther south whenever black wolves were glimpsed near a border village. One of those riders, people said, was scarcely older than a boy and already had the face of a chapel saint painted over a butcher’s hands.
Shiluo had filed the information under unpleasant things best admired from a heroic distance.
Shiluo had wanted her shape to be greatness.
Instead, she had become memorable for all the wrong reasons.
Amber finally pushed herself off the wall and came closer, still smiling. She was beautiful in the way dangerous women often were—too relaxed, too observant, too aware of how the room belonged to them. In Miller Vale, that beauty was the least important thing about her.
Amber was the chief priestess of the Moon Goddess.
Amber was the strongest moon witch in the village.
Amber was, by the more honest local definition, the woman everyone knew better than to cross.
She had bought Shiluo years ago from an eastern merchant ship: one abandoned baby traded for two bundles of dill seed. Amber had never bothered to invent a finer story than that, or a finer name. If the child had been bought for dill, then Dill—Shiluo—she would be.
She had not raised Shiluo as a servant.
She had not exactly raised her as a daughter, either.
Miller Vale had its own customs. Older witches sometimes took in clever orphan girls and trained them. Some became healers. Some became hunters. Some learned augury, poison, charms, or moon-reading. Amber had taken one look at the black-haired foundling from across the sea and decided, for reasons she still refused to explain, that this one would stay.
Now she reached into one of the countless pockets sewn into her robe and pulled out a long-handled bronze lens.
Moonglass.
The circular crystal at its end had been distilled, Amber claimed, from hardened moonlight. Through it, a skilled witch could trace blessings, curses, lies, and the hidden threads of what a thing truly was.
Amber leaned over the cauldron and examined the simmering potion with insulting care.
Shiluo tried not to chew through her own tongue while she waited.
At last Amber sighed. “My poor apprentice. Are you so lacking in faith that you needed a full prayer liturgy before brewing a mere growth draught?”
Shiluo lunged. “Don’t say it that loudly.”
Too late.
Her eyes shot to the window.
A cat’s shadow passed outside.
Then a girl’s shrill voice split the air like a bell. “Shiluo’s brewing again!”
Silence lasted less than a heartbeat.
Then came the chaos.
Pots. Bowls. Wooden spoons. Feet pounding over dirt. The wild metallic clatter of cookware being seized in a hurry. In Miller Vale, a cry like that could summon witches faster than a temple fire.
Amber blinked. Understanding dawned much too late.
A faint shade of guilt crossed her face.
Shiluo covered her eyes with both hands.
Her dream of becoming a great witch had, technically speaking, come true. She had the robes, the lessons, the altar smoke, the midnight rites. She had learned ancient offerings, sacred formulas, herb lore, and proper devotional posture.
She had even learned to brew.
That was where the trouble began.
When other apprentice witches performed the old rites of renewal and cast butchered goat into the cauldron, a lamb came leaping back out.
When Shiluo did it, the whole village got stew.
When other girls made flying ointment, they soared through the woods under the moon.
When Shiluo tried, soft white lumps floated out of the pot and had to be chased across the yard with nets. They tasted like spun sugar and made people drift toward the rafters if they ate enough of them, which the elders counted as a technical success and Shiluo counted as personal humiliation.
When other girls enchanted cloth into silk, she produced candy so fine and shining it draped like a gown before dissolving on the tongue.
When she turned water into wine, half the village nearly started a festival on the spot.
Again and again, the Moon Goddess answered her spells with abundance—but never in the shape anyone wanted.
After much grave testing, three arguments, two minor explosions, and one attempt to scrub her with enough anti-curse herbs to pickle a cow, the elder witches had settled on a theory.
Shiluo had not been cursed.
Worse.
She had been favored.
Somewhere in the Moon Goddess’s vast and contradictory divinity there lay the aspect of Abundance—harvest, sweetness, flesh, ripening, fullness, life overflowing its vessel. For reasons known only to heaven, that blessing clung to Shiluo too closely. It bent her magic sideways. It fattened every spell. It turned rite into feast, potion into confection, sacred labor into supper.
The village girls had even made a song about it.
When Shiluo failed, Miller Vale dined well.
Outside, the noise swelled. Someone was already calling for extra spoons.
Amber winced and peered toward the door. “I did not mean to summon them.”
“You announced my death in public.”
“I announced dinner, apparently.”
Shiluo lowered her hands and glared. “You enjoy this.”
“Only when you make that face.”
A fist hit the door from the other side. “Mistress Amber! We brought bowls!”
Another voice called, “And bread!”
A third, with naked optimism, shouted, “Is it sweet this time?”
Shiluo closed her eyes.
Amber rested a hand briefly on the back of her head—warm, careless, almost kind. “Cheer up, little dill. Plenty of witches spend their lives making poison. You feed people.”
“Yes,” Shiluo muttered. “Like livestock, before slaughter.”
Amber laughed again.
The cauldron bubbled between them, fragrant and innocent. Beyond the door, hungry witches crowded the threshold with the devotion of pilgrims and the discipline of a raiding party.
And Shiluo, apprentice moon witch of Miller Vale, understood with mounting despair that no matter how holy the rite, how careful the prayer, or how pure the moonlight trembling in her basin—
when her magic went wrong, the whole village came with bowls.









Kinda feel bad... but it is pretty funny 😆