What is your opinion?
Love
"I love how you were able to swap narration for different scenes without confusion. The first chapter was very intriguing, it had me hooked "
Office Collar
"Margaret is a relatable lead because she has so much to lose. Seeing a VP of Marketing navigate her professional power while exploring themes of submission creates a fascinating contrast. The writing is seductive and keeps you hooked on the mystery of what’s coming next. I’m excited to see how the secrets mentioned in the notes start to unravel."
Engaging and intriguing first chapter
"I really liked the first chapter: the protagonist’s sensations are portrayed very well, and the writing is smooth and engaging. I’m not a fan of BDSM stories, but in general I’m intrigued by the psychology of the characters and their deeper, more hidden desires. In this chapter, the sexual aspect also takes on importance and gains depth through her sensations, which enriches the scene rather than reducing it to a purely physical encounter. I can’t wait to learn more about the protagonist and see how the story develops."
The first chapter of the novel sets into play the tone for the entire book. You already know what the FL’s history is, without being bored with too many details. It’s also vivid in its description, as expected of an erotica.
"I liked how the writer was able to give a clear idea of the book’s premise. The scene that begins the book is vivid, but the FL’s thoughts are also present, giving us a glimpse into her mind. Then we find out there’s more to the story. An “oh” moment. There was one spelling error, but aside that, good job! "
Office Collar
"Saw your post on Review me. The first chapter had me hooked. Very compelling and just enough detail to pull you in. Pacing and language were perfect. Margaret's emotions come through nicely. I recommend! "
