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In regards of Love

"So far, it is good and I can’t for an update"

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THEY NEED TO UPDATE

"I love the prolouge but they need to add more, I am as a author, but I post mainly on wattpad, at least once a week, this is also a very short post, and they have had plently of time to update. So far the plot is looking good but I'd think they'd be better if they updated."

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Ballet

"I think the setting of this story really has potential: a boy that does ballet. It’s a pity that the author hasn’t posted more on Inkitt yet, as it is hard to judge the plot of the story when there is so little yet revealed. However, one thing I would already advice the author is to be a bit subtler with information. Simply providing a list with all the names of the people in the ballet class is boring a bit too “easy”. Perhaps it’s better to introduce them all one by one, and to do this slowly. But I do like the idea of the story so far and hope the author continues writing!"

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