A Miners Nightmare!!!!

"This story is a thoughtful nightmare! This story is filled with the horrors of a cave in small town. The author does a great job at describing the scene such as the state of the town, or describing what lurks in the cave. He also did a great job describing the scene introducing the protagonist Danny. I was instantly interested when he was banging the television! ha-ha. My note to the author: Don't be afraid to give into the silent moments. Adding moments of silent tension can build with the reader when a threat in re-introduced to a scene. It'll help the audience to feel even more scared and on the edge of their seat. Overall, the author has created a compelling tale that kept me guessing and invested! I hope the author continues to develop future chapters and this world in "40 feet Below". Thumbs up:)"