What is your opinion?
My suicide note
"This story is a whole rollercoaster that hits you right in the feels. It handles heavy, dark themes with a raw honesty that feels super authentic, especially how it balances that deep mental struggle with moments of dry humor. The character dynamics are messy and complicated just like real life, which makes the growth in the final chapters feel totally earned and massive. Seeing that shift from feeling like a "rotten bench" to choosing to write a new fate was honestly such a powerful glow-up. It’s a gritty, emotional journey that ends with a much-needed spark of hope.❤️"
Floating
"To me reading this book was like floating, which is probably one of the best ways to portray the feeling of deep depression - things are happening around you, and you are there, but not really there... I loved the dream-like scenes and the vivid description that accompanied them, also the switching between different scenes, making the audience unsure what was real and what was a dream. I hope you find the time and energy to correct elements like grammar, it would really help the reader appreciate the beauty of the scenery you are painting with words <3"
