Inkitt
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Sweet

"Such a lovely story. I loved everything about it, the simplicity of it, the characters, the pace and ending. "

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Keep writing

"This story is amazing keep writing it "

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In Denial

"Short but full of passion, and to fight being yourself. To have control. Just love this story. Plots was good and characters was well presented. Well done"

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Beautiful

"A lovely short story. A story not beating round the bush but going to point. Thanks for sharing "

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A beautiful and powerful story of reclaiming space 🖤

"Mesmerizing, beautiful and a very powerful story centring around a very powerful and courageous woman. I am so proud of Ava and yes, also Malcolm for being present, for showing up and for letting Ava know she was already powerful, she just needed to be fully seen ❤️"

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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Short but powerful and romantic! I love it"

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Love it

"The story is suspenseful until the end. The characters are well developed for this short story and does better than most long over written stories "

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In Denial

"Love this rags to stardom story. Wishing for an epilogue, hopefully it will happen since I just love reading this! You have a gift for detail and it shows. As a reader, it makes me visualize the intricacy of how beautiful the clothes looks like without the physical picture! Thank you so much for sharing! ❤️❤️❤️"

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A Lovely Story of Woman Who Found Herself!

"A HEA story of a talented woman who decided it was time to stand up and be counted. To stop hiding in the shadows and put it all on the line for herself and her future! AND she gets the guy!! A sweet love story that built her confidence up so much that she wins the night and the guy! Will Definitely reread & recommend. I look forward to finding other novels by this author!!"

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Love it!

"Just what I was looking for... Something different than all the typical books you find on this app. Keep up the good work."

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In Denial

"Love this story and characters, especially incorporation of plus size female main character, as I am plus sized my self, but working on losing some weight. I have lost quite a bit, but have a bit to go to hopefully reach my goal. Nothing real drastic though."

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I'm Denial

"An amazing story. Luv it. It feels like it needs a 2nd book, really need to know what happened the next morning "

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Cute story

"This book was so cute and sweet! In my opinion a bit short, would have loved to read more about Ava and her man 😍"

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