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The silence before chaos

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Summary

A girl named hina was a girl that she trust everyone easily and get hurt again agian then a man named sam came in her life

Genre
Drama
Author
UK
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The casual silence CHAPTER 1

A beautiful sunny morning started with the shouting of Samina (the mother) . The two sisters were laughting and teasing each other . The elder sister name was Hina she was very kind, sweet and naughty and the yonger sister named zara was very irrogant , rude and dashing . The father was sitting in the table waiting for everyone to come . He is very sweet , caring and kind but sometimes strict in the matter of studies . Samina why are you shouting ? (Dad asked) . She both of thm are wasting their time (samina replied) . It's ok days passed like this . A school was going to open and on thursday when both sisters were getting ready after that both school van arrived and after that the younger one goes to bus and mom advice to elder one t tak care of her sister and her . After that assessmbly begins and classes started after that break time started everyone was playing . There was a rule tht at one time one class will play and whoevers break this rue will be punshed. A girl named hamna was jealous of hina and was very selfish says to hina tht call everyone outside we will play together . This was th biggest mistake that hina made and called everyone . The sounds of laughting , birds screeching , boys shouting was enchoring the ground . At that moment a strict and rude teacher name Iqra came to ground and ask 'WHO TOLD YOU TO COME OUT" as hina said to eveeyone so every one says that hina said us at that moment a loud sound of slap enchor the ground . A moment before was a sound of laughing was enchor and now . At that moment hina run to her class . She kept crying hairs ruffled , eyes red and sniffing again and again . After a wile a middle age women comes to class and says" Principle is calling hina" at that mment her heart pumping louding . She went to principle office and saw that teacher sitting there . Principle slapped her and say that "You abuses mam" . Hina was in shocked and said "yes i did" at that moment principle made a suspended certificate and handed to hina . She was expelled from school . After that she went school on wednesday because sh was suspended for three days . She decided to not trust anyone again . After that whe she went to school everyone was very happy and greeted hina again and agi

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a heart touching story

6 months

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