What is your opinion?
The rewrite
"It’s a story that really slowly draws you in for a hook with the twist and turns I love it!!!"
Simple and yet beautiful
"Although the premise is simple—an ex writing a story about their past romance, which the main character now gets to read—the dialogue and writing are so well done. It’s easy to read, and I never feel like I have to strain myself. It’s very touching, and I love it. I can’t wait to see what happens after Chapter 14."
