Two poems

"The author shares two poems with us and definitely leaves us wishing there were more! I think there is a strong use of repetition here that really spoke to me. The poems are furthermore quite descriptive, without resorting to over-used adjectives or clichés. One thing that I could propose to the author to think about is to use more metaphors or comparisons – of course not in these poems, which are already great as they are, but perhaps in future ones. In any case, I hope the author keeps writing poetry and continues to share it with us!"