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Wow

"It was suprise for me . I was not expecting snow white, the fairest of them all to be a vampire. Let alone killing spree she's embarked on the village. I so assumed the queen was the reasom Snow white Mother died but no. A Vampire "

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Narration at its best.

"The best part was the realism. It was written in a way that a narrator could be imagined speaking inside one's head. Also, the ending that happened was not really expected. The story was the main character, rather than Snow White herself."

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Well Written Tale

"For lovers of fairy tales, this is a reworked tale of Snow White. If you are more familiar with the Disney tale you will find this work far more surprising but as most fairy tales go the original one was far darker not unlike this story. Well written and interesting. A strong story built from existing characters "

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Different

"This little story is short and sweet (or not so sweet depending which way you look at it), with a delightful clever dark twist. A fun quick read."

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