Unfinished Shift
Reluctantly, you agreed to work at a bathhouse in exchange for free rent. It wasn’t your first choice, honestly, it wasn’t even your tenth, but options had run out faster than you expected. The manager had been vague, almost too eager when handing you the keys, muttering something about “keeping things clean” and “not staying too late.” You hadn’t thought much of it then. Now, standing in front of the old wooden doors, you wished you had asked more questions.
As you stepped inside, the darkness hit you first. Not just the absence of light, but a thick, suffocating kind of darkness that felt almost alive. The air smelled faintly of damp wood and something older, something you couldn’t quite place. You fumbled along the wall, fingers brushing against peeling paint and cold tiles, until you found the switch.
Click.
The lights flickered weakly before stabilizing, revealing a space frozen in time. The bathhouse looked like it hadn’t been used in years. Dust coated every surface, and the once-polished floors were dull and scratched. Rows of empty lockers lined one wall, their doors slightly ajar like they had been left in a hurry. The bathing area stretched out ahead, tiled pools now drained and cracked, their surfaces reflecting the harsh fluorescent light.
You swallowed, trying to shake the uneasy feeling creeping up your spine. Work was work. You needed a place to stay, and this was the deal.
Following the manager’s instructions scribbled on a crumpled piece of paper, you got to work. You scrubbed the floors, wiped down the lockers, and cleaned the tiles until your arms ached. Time seemed to blur as you focused on the repetitive motions, the sound of scrubbing and dripping water filling the silence.
At some point, you realized something strange.
You couldn’t hear anything outside.
No passing cars. No voices. Not even the faint hum of the city. It was as if the bathhouse existed in its own isolated world.
You paused, listening carefully. Nothing.
“Okay… creepy,” you muttered to yourself, forcing a laugh that sounded far less convincing than you intended.
You went back to cleaning, trying to ignore the growing discomfort. Eventually, after what felt like hours, you finished. The bathhouse looked almost new again, the surfaces gleaming under the artificial light.
You straightened up, wiping sweat from your forehead.
And then the lights flickered.
Then they died completely.
Darkness swallowed everything.
Your breath hitched. “Hello?” you called out instinctively, though you knew no one should be there.
No response.
Then you heard it.
Footsteps.
Soft at first. Barely audible. But unmistakable.
They echoed through the bathhouse, slow and deliberate, each step growing louder, closer. The sound didn’t match the layout of the place, it was too clear, too sharp, like whoever was walking knew exactly where you were.
Your heart began to pound.
“Manager?” you tried, your voice trembling.
The footsteps didn’t stop.
They kept coming.
You took a step back, your hand fumbling for anything, a wall, a door, something to orient yourself. But the darkness felt disorienting, like the space itself had shifted.
The footsteps were right behind you now.
You didn’t dare turn around.
A cold breath brushed against the back of your neck.
And everything went black.
When you came to your senses, the first thing you noticed was the sound of rain.
Soft at first, then steady, tapping rhythmically against glass.
You opened your eyes slowly, wincing as your head throbbed. The room around you was dim, lit only by weak grey light filtering through a single window. Dust floated in the air, visible in the faint glow.
You pushed yourself up, looking around.
This wasn’t the bathhouse.
You were in a small, cramped room with peeling walls and old wooden furniture. A narrow bed sat in one corner, its mattress stained and sunken. The window was cracked, rainwater trickling down its surface.
“What…?” you whispered, your voice hoarse.
Panic bubbled beneath the surface, but you forced yourself to stay calm. There had to be an explanation. Maybe you had passed out. Maybe someone had moved you.
But deep down, you knew that didn’t make sense.
You reached into your pocket, your fingers brushing against something familiar.
A lighter.
You flicked it on, the small flame casting flickering shadows across the room. The light made everything look worse, the stains darker, the corners deeper, the atmosphere heavier.
You stood up slowly and moved toward the door. It creaked loudly as you opened it, the sound echoing unnaturally down the hallway beyond.
Stepping out, you found yourself in what looked like an abandoned boarding school.
The hallway stretched endlessly in both directions, lined with doors and old lockers. The floorboards creaked under your weight, and the air was thick with dust and decay.
The architecture felt… different.
As you moved forward, you noticed the details, wooden beams carved with intricate patterns, sliding doors instead of standard ones, paper panels torn and yellowed with age. It resembled a traditional Japanese-style school, something you’d only seen in pictures or movies.
Your lighter flickered as you walked, the flame struggling against an unseen draft.
“Okay… this is not real,” you muttered. “This is not happening.”
But the more you walked, the more real it felt.
You tried a few doors. Most were locked. One opened to reveal an empty classroom, desks covered in dust and arranged neatly as if waiting for students who would never return.
You backed away, unease tightening in your chest.
At the end of the hallway, you noticed something odd.
A staircase.
Or rather… what used to be one.
It was blocked off with wooden planks nailed haphazardly across the entrance. The boards looked old but sturdy, like someone had gone out of their way to make sure no one could pass.
“Why block a staircase?” you whispered.
Curiosity, and a growing sense that you had no other choice, pushed you forward.
You looked around and spotted a crowbar leaning against the wall nearby, as if placed there intentionally. That alone made your skin crawl.
Still, you picked it up.
With a deep breath, you wedged the crowbar between the planks and pulled.
The wood groaned but didn’t give.
You tried again, harder this time.
Crack.
One of the planks splintered.
Encouraged, you kept going, prying and pulling until the barrier gave way enough for you to squeeze through.
Beyond it, the staircase stretched upward into darkness.
You hesitated.
Every instinct screamed at you to turn back.
But there was nowhere else to go.
So you climbed.
Each step creaked under your weight, the sound echoing unnaturally in the silence. The higher you went, the colder the air became.
At the top, you emerged into another hallway.
This one felt… wrong.
The woodwork was more intricate, the shadows deeper, the silence heavier. It felt like stepping into a different place entirely.
You took a step forward.
And that’s when you saw it.
A door.
It didn’t match the rest of the hallway. While everything else looked aged and worn, this door was… different. Cleaner. Newer. Almost out of place.
Your grip tightened around the crowbar.
“Don’t open it,” a voice in your head whispered.
You reached for the handle anyway.
Slowly, you pushed the door open.
The smell hit you first.
Sharp. Metallic. Wrong.
Inside the room, your lighter flickered wildly, casting chaotic shadows across the walls.
And then you saw it.
A well sat in the center of the room, its edges dark and damp. Beside it was a large tub filled with a murky liquid that gave off a faint, unpleasant smell.
On the wall—
You froze.
A ribcage hung there, suspended like some kind of grotesque decoration.
Your breath caught in your throat.
“Nope,” you whispered, backing away. “Nope, nope, nope—”
A sound interrupted you.
A soft scraping noise.
Coming from the well.
You turned your head slowly, every movement feeling heavy and delayed.
The darkness inside the well seemed to shift.
Something was moving.
A pale hand gripped the edge.
Your heart stopped.
A figure began to emerge, its movements unnatural and jerky. Long, dark hair obscured its face, and its presence seemed to suck the warmth out of the room.
You didn’t wait.
Adrenaline surged through your body as you spun around and slammed the door shut. Without thinking, you raised the crowbar and brought it down against the handle, jamming it in place.
A loud, guttural scream erupted from the other side.
It wasn’t human.
It echoed through the hallway, vibrating through the walls and into your bones.
You ran.
Your footsteps pounded against the wooden floor as you sprinted down the hallway, the sound of something slamming against the door behind you.
The hallway seemed longer than before, stretching endlessly as panic blurred your vision. The shadows twisted and shifted, and for a moment, you swore you saw something moving alongside you.
You pushed yourself harder, lungs burning, legs screaming in protest.
The staircase came into view.
You didn’t slow down.
Taking the steps two at a time, you rushed downward, nearly slipping as your foot caught on a loose board. You grabbed the railing to steady yourself and kept going.
Behind you, the sound of movement echoed.
You burst through the broken barrier and into the lower hallway, not stopping for a second.
The rain outside grew louder, almost deafening now.
The exit—
Where was the exit?
You turned a corner
And froze.
The hallway wasn’t the same.
The doors were different. The layout had changed.
“No, no, no—”
A whisper echoed behind you.
You ran again, blindly choosing a direction, your only goal to get away.
Away from that thing.
Away from this place.
The screams followed you, growing louder, closer, filling every corner of the building.
And as you ran, one thought repeated over and over in your mind:
You were never supposed to leave the bathhouse.