Great humour

"“The post-apocalypse fucking sucks” – This is a great sentence to put in the beginning of a story! I loved the humorous writing style of this author, which is not only apparent in sentences such as those, but also in the entire story. The glorification of cake is not something I can take too seriously but I got the impression this is exactly the point. Quite some absurdity going on and this is what makes the story great in my opinion. Only thing is, of course, that the story already ended after this first chapter. It made me realize that the plot is not too apparent in this first part. Therefore I would advice the author to already reveal some more “mystery” in this first part, so that the reader gets a glimpse into what’s going to happen. Perhaps the author can use some prospective techniques, like letting the main character make links between things in the present and the future… Anyway, I like the writing style a lot, so I hope more is revealed!"