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: The Blood Debt of the Haunted Carriage

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Summary

Story, Horror, Life, Balkan.

Genre
Horror
Author
Danijel
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Title: The Blood Debt of the Haunted Carriage

Marko was living in Sarajevo when his grandfather, Jovo, fell terminally ill. On his deathbed, Jovo whispered a secret he had kept hidden his entire life. He handed Marko an old, tarnished watch and told him to go to his ancestral village in Herzegovina.

"Marko, my son," Jovo gasped with his final breaths, "be careful... because there is no turning back once you enter."

When Marko arrived at the village and opened the door of the old family house, the smell of damp rot and stagnant air hit him instantly. Dusting off an old table, he found a photograph. It was a man who looked exactly like his grandfather, but it was his brother, Ilija—someone Jovo rarely spoke of, only saying he had "passed away long ago." Marko hung the photo on the wall and went for a walk to clear his head.

He met an old woman and greeted her. When she asked whose boy he was, he replied, "I am a Lazić, Jovo’s grandson." He asked her about the history of the village, but the woman grew cold and snapped, "I know nothing!" before slamming her door in his face. Shocked, Marko continued until he met Old Ivan. Ivan invited him in for a glass of rakija, but the moment Marko asked about the strange legends of the village, Ivan turned pale as a sheet and quickly changed the subject.

Later, Marko met a girl named Elena. She was the only one brave enough to speak. She told him the legend of the cursed wedding carriage that plunged off the cliff many years ago. "Everyone died," she whispered. "My grandmother told me the story. I can even show you the spot."

When they reached the cliff, a heavy sense of dread filled Marko’s chest. He hurried Elena back to his house for a drink, and after she left, he sat by the fire, smoking and thinking about her words. He eventually fell into a restless sleep, only to be jolted awake at 2:00 AM by the sound of music and singing echoing through the mountains.

Driven by a force he couldn't explain, Marko put on his coat and followed the music. It led him straight to the cliff. There, shrouded in mist, stood the wedding party and the carriage. A man stepped out of the carriage and walked toward him. It was the man from the photo.

"I am Ilija," the ghost said. Marko stood frozen, unable to speak. "Your grandfather, my own brother Jovo, abandoned me. I could have survived the fall. He climbed down, saw me alive, and then went back up and told the villagers that no one survived. He was jealous of me since we were children, but especially the day I told him I was marrying my beautiful Kata. He loved her, but she wouldn't even look at him. That was the day he decided to kill me. He was the one leading the horses, and he drove them off the cliff on purpose."

Ilija stepped closer, his eyes cold and hollow. "A debt must be paid."

The night ended in tragedy. The next morning, Elena went to Marko's house to invite him for a walk, but the house was empty. She ran to the cliff and found him. Marko was lying there, his face pale and lifeless. Dead.

She ran to Old Ivan, who only looked at her and whispered: "The debt has been settled."

Far away, in his final moments, Marko’s grandfather Jovo died in agonizing pain. Evil always comes back to collect—especially when you turn against your own blood.

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