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Porn

"So this is a rather explicit story. Really it’s a pornographic piece of work. Personally I’m a fan of those, and I know many women who prefer words over video when it comes to pornography. I have to be honest here though and say that I found it not too interesting. Once again the idea is created that a woman’s pleasure comes just from a men entering a part of his body (yes, also his fingers) into her “holes”. This is such a false belief going around in the world, based totally on men’s fantasies. I would rewrite the story in such a way that the woman’s clitoris is also involved! Then it would make me more excited ;-)"

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