Intriguing

"The story starts off dynamically and I love it. You have vivid descriptions and I felt as if I were taken by an angel together with the character. The choices, the questions, everything is so deep and meaningful. There is a sense of danger at the beginning and I was puzzled by certain parts. You have a great writing style. It is engaging and absorbing. You know how to make the reader a part of your story, which is an important element in writing and a great feature of an author. Overall, I believe this story is going to develop in the right direction and I hope to read more soon."