Stunning and Deeply Moving

"Wow, this poem completely blew me away. The beginning perfectly captures that heavy, relatable feeling of being invisible and 'not enough,' which makes the rest of the piece hit so much harder. The imagery is stunning—especially that terrifying moment where he freezes, scared that the door will slam shut and leave him alone inside 'all this white.' You can feel the exact moment the energy shifts from deep isolation to absolute awe when she stops walking. It makes that final moment by the fence feel so incredibly powerful. This is a beautiful, raw piece of writing that gave me chills and stays with you long after reading."