Inkitt
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Compelling take on a captive bride story

"This story is a take of the trope of ‘captive bride’ set in the viking lands of Scandinavia. Expect power imbalance, tears, discipline, and the drama that comes from being forced into a new role in a new country. This story is 10% action, 50% drama and 40% spicy romance. The female lead (Maeve) is a compelling character who holds onto her spirit and morals with determined courage. Her captor Ragnar is flawed but also deeply committed to his own understanding of justice. I found the dialogue in chapter 7 particularly engaging. Very worth reading!! 🎥 Single perspective - the female lead 🤬 Some incidental swearing. 🔪 Some action violence. 💋 Some graphic sex scenes. 🔚 No cliff hangers. "

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Great story, loved every chapter

"Your writing is excellent, your language and story has a great flow. Both main characters develop nicely together and you manage to end the story without getting to cheesy. And the spice trough the story spreads naturally and doesn’t feel «forced» just to please us horny readers here on inkit😘 I will love to follow your writing further, and discover more of your stories. "

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Spicy Viking

"Loved this very much...have just read it again as this story has always intregued me. Job well done as always to such a talent...thank you for helping me through a very windy, no electricity, miserable day! 💜💋💜💋💜💋💜💋"

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