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After the Whistle

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Summary

Evan Hayes was drafted to be the future of the team—fast, talented, and completely incapable of following orders. Jasper Laaksonen is the captain. Calm. Controlled. The kind of player who doesn’t lose his temper—because he never needs to. When the coaches put Evan on Jasper’s line, it’s supposed to teach him control. Instead, it turns into something else. Late-night drills. Private corrections. A kind of discipline that has nothing to do with hockey.

Status
Complete
Chapters
45
Rating
5.0 (16 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

The Rookie - Jasper

The kid walked in like he owned the place.

That was the first thing Jasper noticed. Not the face—though the face was a problem he’d file away for later, thank you—but the walk. Chin up. Shoulders loose. Eyes doing a slow sweep of the room like he was deciding who to worry about and who to charm.

Rookies didn’t walk like that.

Rookies walked in with their heads down and their hands buried in their warm-up jackets and their voices pitched carefully polite, all yes sir and thanks for having me and I’ll do whatever the team needs. They shrank. They made themselves small. They understood they hadn’t earned the right to take up space yet.

Evan Hayes was taking up all the space.

Jasper leaned back on the bench, one skate half-laced in his lap, and watched the kid’s eyes land on him. Land, register, hold.

Didn’t look away.

Huh.

“Boys.” Coach Marshall’s voice cut through the low hum of the room. “This is Evan Hayes. Up from Connecticut. He’s going to be skating with Laaksonen tonight, so make him feel welcome. Hayes—”

And the kid was already moving. Crossing the room like the introduction was a formality he’d already internalized, hand already out, and Jesus Christ, the smile on him—half-crooked, pure mischief, the kind of smile that had probably gotten him into every bar fight of his AHL career and out of exactly none of them.

“Captain.” Warm voice. Steady handshake. American vowels round as nickels. “Heard a lot about you.”

“Hayes.” Jasper didn’t stand. Didn’t need to. He kept his face in the polite neutral he’d been wearing since he was nineteen and some Finnish journalist had taught him that stoic read better in print than exhausted. “Welcome to New York.”

“Thanks.” That grin again. “I’ve been wanting to play with you for a while, actually.”

I bet you have, Jasper thought, and then immediately wanted to drown himself in the nearest Gatorade cooler because—what. No. Absolutely not. The kid meant hockey. The kid meant line chemistry. The kid meant watching film and learning from a veteran. The kid did not mean whatever his brain had just tried to do with that sentence.

He’d been in New York too long. The city was rotting him.

“We’ll see how you skate,” Jasper said, and went back to his laces.

He could feel Hayes still standing there. Hovering. Reading him.

Hayes laughed. Quiet. Under his breath. Like Jasper had just confirmed something he’d already suspected.

“Yeah, Cap,” Hayes said. “We’ll see.”

And walked away.

Jasper did not watch him walk away.

He did not.

He absolutely did not clock the line of the kid’s shoulders under that too-new team polo, or the way his hair was still wet from wherever he’d showered before driving in, or the fact that he was built like an agitator—compact, centered, deceptively strong through the hips—the kind of body that got under defensemen’s skin and stayed there like a splinter.

Jasper had watched his tape.

Of course he had. That was the job. The team had called him three days ago—heads up, we’re bringing Hayes up, think about the line—and Jasper had spent two evenings with a beer and his iPad, watching every shift Hayes had played in Connecticut this year. Every scrum. Every goal. Every incident.

And there had been incidents.

The kid chirped. Constantly. Relentlessly. He had the Connecticut bench laughing on three separate clips Jasper could remember off the top of his head, and he had the opposing bench wanting to climb over the boards and murder him on at least four. He took runs at guys twice his size. He dragged star defensemen into stupid penalties by existing near them. He had opinions about the refs, and those opinions were loud, and those opinions were extremely fucking funny when they weren’t costing his team the power play.

He was not Jasper’s kind of teammate.

Jasper liked quiet men. Liked professional men. Liked the ones who showed up early, left late, said please and thank you to the equipment guys, and didn’t make his job as captain harder than it already was. He liked Antti. He liked Brännström. He liked Volkov, who barely spoke English and communicated entirely through furious nodding.

He did not, historically, like agitators.

But—

But New York was bleeding in the neutral zone. Had been all season. They were getting pushed around by teams who knew they wouldn’t push back, and Coach had been muttering about identity in every post-game speech for six weeks, and the front office had started using words like pest and edge and nastiness in their trade deadline calls.

And here was Evan Hayes. Twenty-two years old. Finally got the call. Hungry enough to eat the locker room door on his way in.

Jasper understood why he was here.

He also understood the kid was going to be a fucking handful.

“Laaksonen.” Coach, at his elbow. Voice pitched low. “A word.”

Jasper set his skate down and followed him out.

Coach walked him to the hallway outside the room, stopped, crossed his arms. Didn’t bother with preamble. He never did. It was one of the things Jasper liked about him.

“You’re going to be working close with him.”

“I figured.”

“Not just on the ice.” Marshall’s eyes flicked back toward the door. “He’s a good kid. Smart. Works hard. But he’s been the biggest personality in every room he’s been in since juniors, and this is the first time that’s going to bite him. I want him under you.”

Jasper did not react to that phrasing.

“Understood,” he said.

“He’s talented, Jasper.” Marshall’s voice went quieter, which was as close as the man ever got to sentiment. “Genuinely. The kind of talented that makes me nervous, because I’ve seen what this city does to kids like that. I need you to—” He made a vague gesture, frustrated with his own English, the way he got when he was trying to say something he actually meant. “Keep him. Keep him a person. You understand?”

Jasper looked at him.

Marshall had been in the league for thirty years. Had coached four captains before Jasper. Had buried two of his own players, at different points, for different reasons, and had never—not once, in the five years they’d worked together—asked Jasper to keep somebody.

“Yeah,” Jasper said quietly. “I understand.”

“Good.” Marshall clapped him on the shoulder. “Skate him hard tonight. See what he’s made of. And Laaksonen—”

“Yeah?”

“Don’t let him chirp Brännström yet. Give it a week.”

Jasper almost smiled.

He walked back into the locker room, and Hayes was already at the stall they’d given him—two down from Jasper’s, which could not possibly be an accident—pulling gear out of his bag with the focus of a man who had packed that bag twenty times in the last two years for twenty different call-ups and sit-downs and reassignments and hotel rooms.

The kid looked up as Jasper passed.

That smile again. Smaller, this time. Almost private.

“Cap.”

“Hayes.”

Jasper sat back down at his stall. Picked up his skate. Laced it the way he’d laced his skates ten thousand times before.

And thought: this is going to be a problem.

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