What is your opinion?
Strong Start
"I have absolutely been loving this story so far. There is a sizeable cast of characters introduced from the get, who can definitely take a chapter or two to get used to, but their personalities are all so different and loveable, and the interpersonal dynamics attention-grabbing, that it's easy to get lost in them. The humor is top-tier, including the neverending roast of Damon, and the dialogue is crisp and natural. I will definitely be reading more! #ICBC"
I've been grinning the whole time
"I'm not a fan of romcoms, but so far, this book has put a smile on my face and it's been there from parapgraph 2! The banter is very well flowed, the team you meet is fun and sweet and I love how they talk their boss up. If every team had this relationship, the world would have been a better place ;) The plot does seem a little too predictable, but the work is still very amusing and pleasant. I'll definitely stay on for the journey 🥰 #ICBC"
I live for the banter 🙃
"Such a sweet and amusing story with likable characters, top-notch banter, and SO much chemistry. Seriously, the dialogue in this one is something else. Lara and Damon are fantastic together, and the supporting characters are just as fun. Wen Ting is my favourite so far. 😊 I love how entertaining the interactions are, and honestly, I could read these characters bantering back and forth all day. Such a fun read!"
Unplanned Variables
"This story is so sweet! It's very enjoyable to read and I've caught myself smiling a few times throughout the chapter. With it being a military story, the additions of military lingo are built nicely into the world and naturally into the dialogue. All the characters are great so far. It's nice that they're all a little goofy and able to share banter with one another. I'm very excited to continue reading and see how Lara and Damon's story ends. I'll update this review once I finish reading! #icbc"
An addictive read
"The story completely stole my heart! The author writes with such an open, vibrant and cinematic style. The chemistry between the main characters is magnetic and the back-and-forth dialogue had me smiling the entire time. It’s fun, fast-paced and packed with brilliant emotional payoff. Highly, highly recommended!"
A perfect blend of romance, realism, and humor.
"The chemistry between Damon and Lara is powerful and immediately captivating. Their romance buds from one playful, sweet initial interaction on a plane and blossoms naturally as the story evolves. All of the characters in this book are well-rounded, distinct, and feel real. The dialogue and banter between characters are delightful, highly realistic, and full of humorous moments. In addition to the sweet romance, the book also explores themes of family and friendship. This novel is a perfect read for a cozy, comforting binge session; it's smooth and well-written, with highly relatable characters that provide hours of joy and laughter. #ICBC"
Beautiful Love Story
"This was such a beautiful love story! It’s an easy, engaging read with fantastic chemistry between the characters and plenty of genuinely funny moments scattered throughout. I was hooked from the very beginning and couldn't put it down. Highly recommended for anyone looking for a captivating romantic read!"
And I'm not even done, yet...
"*cracks fingers* Right! So... You know the feeling you get when you read a story and you're like: "Yeah... this is my kind of story!" Well, Unplanned Variables was exactly that for me! Huh? Why? Ok then! Here we go! Plot: We follow the developing romance of Lara and Damian who, of all places, met on a damn plane! That alone should tell you enough! They immediately click and stick to each other like glue! I know most of us have been there, or at least I hope so! The way it's described in Unplanned Variables is EXACTLY how it feels in real life! And how it goes for that matter! Characters: Once again, not only are the FMC and the MMC amazing but also, the whole damn side cast is on point! Everyone serves a purpose! A best friend/wingman, a brother/voice of logic and many more! All sorts of personalities! All super fun! Dialogue: Dude... at this point, it is common knowledge how much I absolutely adore realistic, gritty dialogue. This is literally as good as it gets! Not a single damn line is wasted! It's either a snark joke/comeback, a touch of plot or even sometimes some "nice spice!" Or heck, a combination of them all! I could go on and on but, I wanna read more before I come back to edit this review! Until then, I'll be "flying" with Lara and Damian to the end of their story!"
Warm, emotional story with a very suspenseful and promising ending
"I really enjoyed reading this story, filled with humor, love, care, and friendship. The author did a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life, each with their own personality and backstory, while making them all part of a close-knit circle of friends and family. ❤️ Lara and Damon’s relationship is built on respect, love, and support. What started as a joke on a plane gradually, yet surprisingly quickly, grew into a real and meaningful relationship. I loved how Lara’s cheerful, straightforward, and playful personality complements Damon’s more reserved and serious nature. They balance each other beautifully, bringing out sides of one another that might have otherwise remained hidden. Beyond the romance, I also loved the way their friends and family fit into the story. Their interactions add warmth, humor, and depth, making you feel like you’re part of their little world. It’s the kind of story that leaves you smiling and reminds you how beautiful it is to find someone who accepts you, supports you, and makes life a little brighter. 🥰"
I laughed, I teared up, I enjoyed the ride
"Unplanned Variables was such a fun read! Lara, who is from Singapore, and Damon, a member of the US Army, meet at the airport and discover they're sharing a flight to the States. Their chemistry is immediate, but with their lives rooted in two different countries, falling for each other isn't exactly simple. I loved/hated their long-distance romance, but the relationships with their families and friends made the story just as enjoyable. The dialogue was fantastic, the humor had me laughing out loud, and there were also a few moments that unexpectedly had me tearing up. This story kept me entertained from beginning to end."
Heart warming
"A heart warming story with a great cast of characters, all of who are very individual. There's a nice layer of humour thrown in with the banter between the characters. I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship between the two MC's continues to develop. #icbc"
A masterclass in character work and earned intimacy
"Unplanned Variables is a joy to read. The real triumph is the character work—the psychological depth behind every reaction, piece of banter, and moment of hesitation shows an author who truly understands human nature. Watching the connection between Damon and Lara develop felt completely authentic. There is a beautiful balance between sharp, playful wit and raw, unguarded vulnerability, making the growing trust between them genuinely compelling. The language flows so naturally that the chapters just disappear beneath you. If you appreciate romance where the emotional stakes are treated with care, maturity, and great craft, do yourself a favor and dive in. Highly recommended! #ICBC"
My Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ / 5(Note: I’m just a few chapters away from the ending, but I love it so much I had to write this now!)
"There are romance novels that shout their love stories from the rooftops with grand gestures and candlelit dinners. And then there are books like The Unplanned Variables—books that whisper, letting the love build so naturally in the quiet spaces between characters that it completely catches you off guard. From the moment Lara, a sharp, quick-witted girl from Singapore, meets Damon, a brilliant but heavily scarred military man known as "The Ghost," on a plane, their chemistry is undeniable. But what makes this story so captivating isn't just their immediate attraction; it is the sheer joy of watching them interact. The humor and sharp banter between all the characters create a beautiful sense of closeness that makes you feel like you are part of their circle at the army base. Lara is a breath of fresh air. She is playful, strict when she needs to be, and fiercely independent, yet she knows exactly how to wrap Damon in warmth, showing her love through home-cooked meals and intuitive care. Damon carries deep, hidden past traumas, but Lara sees right through his "Ghost" exterior.The absolute magic of Dara’s writing lies in the micro-moments. It’s in the stolen glances, the slight touches, and the silent understanding between two vulnerable people. The moment that permanently hooked me was a simple scene involving a shoulder ointment. No planned parties, no dramatic speeches—just a quiet, raw realization from Damon that he is experiencing a love he never thought he was allowed to have, leading to an unplanned, perfectly timed "I love you." If you are tired of manufactured romance drama and crave a story rooted in genuine connection, humor, and emotional depth, this book hits entirely different. It is a stunning reminder that the most profound love stories are found in the most ordinary, quiet moments."
I'm loving it
"I’m still reading, but I’m really enjoying this story so far. Damon and Lara have such natural chemistry, and I love how their relationship keeps developing through the flirting, humor, and the more vulnerable moments between them. The banter is one of my favorite parts, especially with the rest of the gang constantly making things even more entertaining. I also really like what Lara brings out in Damon and how much softer and more open he’s becoming around her. It’s funny, sweet, and easy to get invested in, and I’m really looking forward to seeing where their relationship goes."
Fun Banter, Great Chemistry, and a Promising Slow Burn
"I’m really enjoying Unplanned Variables so far! The group dynamic immediately stood out to me, the banter between the guys feels natural and gives each character personality without taking away from the developing romance. Lara is easy to like, and I especially enjoy the way the attraction is building between her and Damon through small looks, awkward moments, and plenty of teasing from everyone around them. It feels like we're getting the beginning of a genuine slow burn rather than an instant romance. There are also little hints that there’s more happening beneath the surface, especially with the mentions of Ghost, which have definitely made me curious. The combination of humor, friendship, military life, travel, and budding romance has made this a fun read so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when they finally reach Singapore!"
Can't wait to read More
"This is a good story, read 2 chapters so far and I'm hooked. It's charming, heartwarming, and funny. Can't wait to read more! #ICBC"
Fun to read
"I love reading books featuring cultures/backgrounds different from mine. I’ve never read a book with this setting and I love how Tamil is sprinkled in. The main characters fall for each other pretty quickly and engage in lots of banter. Sometimes the number of characters can be hard to keep up with, especially the MMC’s friends/coworkers. But I like the chemistry between them. I’m looking forward to how the plot develops and how the main couple overcome tensions. "
Banter Heaven
"I absolutely love banter and comedy in stuff I read, and this one delivers it all to me in every chapter. Damon and Lara are cute and I love their dynamics. I bet they are going to be a power couple. Can't wait to read more!"
Cliff Hanger
"I was wondering when the plot twist would occur. I am very curious about what comes next. "
I'm sorry but I like AJ more
"Found your story on r/Inkitt. I am glad I stopped by for a read. I will continue reading when you post because I love the real world slant. The writing has real depth of character and feels like it is written from a point of lived experience authority. My only problem is Damon is a snoozer, and AJ, Tex, and even James have more personality. I feel like that is supposed to be the thing with him, but his entourage is funnier and more likable at this point."
