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"The quiet tension of Shenshen choosing the lone seat at the back creates a simple but very visual opening. Fu Shihan’s cold, distant aura,especially that sharp look in his eyes,comes across vividly with minimal detail. I loved the cafeteria scene; Shenshen calmly continuing to eat after the spill is such a strong, understated image. The moment he places his coat over her shoulders feels cinematic and visually striking. "

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