Inkitt
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"This poem tells a perfectly relatable story of its own. It even has its own plot twist, about success and failure. I believe that everyone can relate to this and that is why this is bound to live on. All those kind natured persons, who are good to everyone in spite of wrongdoings they have experience from others. All those that live with a kind heart among the hatred of their species. All those that have not succeeded in anything, that have not prospered. Read this and learn what success is. Read it and accept. Accept who and what you are. Finding peace and acceptance is the core of this poem. There is a song from a local band in my country which says something that can be applied here. I will translate the gist of it for you. It goes something like this: “For once in your life, raise the white flag and accept it as your victory”."

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