Interesting and puzzling

"A really weird first date, I must agree with you. There is a sense of danger throughout it and it is kind of thrilling and dynamic. I love how she worries and creates scenarios in her head – and bad things occur to her before the normal, obvious ones. This might hint at something in the rest of your story. Or it might just be the alcohol thinking instead of her. I was a bit confused in the beginning with the first person/third person perspective thing. I quickly got the hang of it, but I think you might want to find a way of separating this somehow. I have enjoyed the story so far and I am curious about what happens next."