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What am unusual story

"So much that was different. Including the whole narrative. It could have had more filler but was great and refreshing! Each part could be seperate and added more details that would align this story with others but instead it was blunt and basic. That was why it was so refreshing!"

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Interesting story

"Its a nice fast pacing story but it's tiring to read because it's like reading telegraphs. Too short sentences like reading headlines which ruins the narrative."

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