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"The story starts of as a modern, contemporary writing which turns to criticize the youth, their habits and the new ways of conduct, behavior and of living at all. However, the story quickly goes into a different direction. It is mysterious, yet warm. And although there are some strange, maybe paranormal occurrences, I did not get a sense of danger and I was not worried about something bad happening to the characters. You have this warm style and sense of writing which intrigues and enchants the reader. I really love this and I love this whole story – both its idea and how you have written it. Everything is perfect."

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