Revenant of Revenge
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Revenant of Revenge

All Rights Reserved ©

Story Notes

The Revenant of revenge is going to be the first book of a series that I will be calling The Decay Chronicles, and I will be starting production on the second book when this one is fully posted onto Inkitt, I honestly hope that you all enjoy this book and the hard work that has gone into the world I am trying to build, and thank you all for reading any of it.

Summary

When the God of Chaos and Decay is betrayed by the pantheon he once stood among, he is sealed away from the world he swore to protect — left with nothing but the echo of an apology and centuries of darkness. Malathor returns to find a world that has forgotten him. The faithful are gone. His domain lies dormant. And the balance he once maintained has been fracturing in his absence, the evidence of it bleeding through in rifts that grow stronger with every passing year. His way back begins with a desperate young man named Max Carrion, who summons whatever will answer and offers everything he has — his body, his memories, his future — in exchange for one thing. Save my family. The deal is struck. But nothing goes as either of them planned. Inhabiting Max's failing body, Malathor must navigate a world rebuilt without him — a noble family on the edge of ruin, an Academy teaching magic so degraded it barely deserves the name, old allies carrying guilt they have never put down, and enemies who do not yet know what they have awakened. And somewhere in the middle of it all, a daughter he never knew existed is waiting to come home. The God of Chaos and Decay has returned. The people who sealed him away are about to find out what patience, power, and a father's love look like when they are finally given room to breathe.

Status
Complete
Chapters
58
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Steel met steel with a deafening ring as I parried the Goddess of Light’s blade. I’d never liked her — all that self-righteous order, that blinding certainty that her way was the only way. The fool had no idea what she’d unleashed by waging war against me. Her armies lay in ruins, crushed by my followers and the hidden traps I’d laid across the battlefield. All things bow to entropy eventually — even gods.

I leapt backward, narrowly avoiding the spears of light she hurled at me. My patience was wearing thin. My wings — more for show than flight on the best of days, cumbersome things that snagged on doorways and made sleeping a contorted affair — were useless now. One of her spears had torn through the left one while I slept, shredding feathers and membrane alike. A coward’s move. Fitting, for her.

“Your reign as the Judge ends today!” she screamed.

White chains of magic materialized around me, binding my limbs. They tightened with each breath, divine light burning where they touched my skin. But I could not help but smile.

Her face contorted in confusion as I laughed, my voice rolling across the battlefield like thunder from a cloudless sky.

“You always were blind,” I said, my voice carrying despite the distance between us. “Even now, you fail to see what’s right before you.”

Her eyes widened as the chains began to darken, then crumble. “Impossible,” she breathed. “These are divine restraints—”

“Nothing lasts forever,” I replied, flexing my claws as the last of her bindings turned to ash. “Not even your precious order.”

I lunged forward, my blade singing through the air. She parried, but this time my sword split — three shards, then five, then countless fragments that reformed into a whip of jagged metal. It wrapped around her ankle and yanked her from the sky. She crashed into the scorched earth with a cry of pain, her wings shredding on impact, hanging in bloody strips from her shoulder blades.

I watched her struggle to rise, golden ichor leaking from her split lip. Once, eons ago, I would have rushed to her side. Offered my hand. Now something molten surged through me — fury that tasted like ash — and I drove my foot into her ribs with a sickening crack. She sprawled across the blood-soaked dirt, a pained sound escaping lips that had never once spoken a kind word when I had offered her nothing but devotion.

Those days were long gone.

“BASTARD!” The thunderous voice of Garrith, God of Justice, split the sky as he crashed between us, cratering the earth. His golden armor blazed like a second sun, eyes burning with celestial fury.

I met his rage with glacial calm.

“She violated my domain,” I said, my voice dropping to a whisper that somehow carried over the chaos. “Slaughtered my followers. Their blood demands retribution.”

My wings snapped open — a sound like breaking bones — midnight feathers bristling as darkness pooled at my feet. The pantheon materialized around us in flashes of divine light, their auras clashing like storm fronts. Seraphine, Goddess of Peace, glided between us on gossamer wings, her silver eyes brimming with unshed tears.

“Please,” she implored, hands outstretched toward both Garrith and me. “End this bloodshed.”

Several deities moved to flank me — Mortis with his obsidian scythe, Vexara wrapped in her cloak of twilight shadows. Their allegiance was clear without a word spoken.

“I remained neutral until your zealots slaughtered my followers at their sacred grounds,” I said, black ichor dripping from my fangs onto the earth where it sizzled and smoked. “Their screams still echo in my domain.” My rage had cooled from white-hot to smoldering embers, but I would not permit interference with the judgment I had begun to deliver.

Then Kirilith stepped forward — silver-threaded robes billowing around her ankles like morning mist, ancient eyes reflecting the carnage around us. Of all of them, she was the one I had expected least to find against me.

“Malathor,” she said quietly. “The people are suffering in both realms. This needs to stop.”

“Then tell me why my people were slaughtered,” I said, my voice cracking the stone beneath our feet. “They were innocent. Every one of them.” My followers had never taken more than they needed. Those few who had grown greedy learned quickly that their god of decay could turn his gifts against them — reducing ill-gotten gains to worthless ruin. It was a lesson most only needed to learn once.

She had no answer. None of them did.

I raised my head, midnight ichor still dripping from my fangs, and let my gaze move across the assembled pantheon slowly. “If she touches what is mine again,” I said, my voice quiet now, which was somehow worse than shouting, “I will tear her realm apart and feed the remains to the void. That is not a warning. It is a promise.”

The ancient magic beneath my feet pulsed before I finished speaking.

The binding seal rose around me without warning — runes burning with celestial light, cold and absolute. I felt it the moment it touched my divine essence, felt it begin to compress something vast and old and furious into something smaller, and smaller still. Shadow and Death lunged toward me, spectral hands outstretched, but they were already too late.

Lyra, Goddess of the Moon, would not meet my eyes.

“I’m sorry,” she whispered. “But your wrath has to end somewhere.”

The seal erupted. My roar of betrayal shattered the air as reality tore around me — and then there was nothing at all.


My own name reached me faintly through the void — little more than a whisper threading through the darkness, but enough. The seals that had bound my form for so long were crumbling at last, worn down by the slow, patient work of my own divine power. Limited as it was now. I could feel the difference keenly — what had once been the crushing weight of a god who sat at the top of the pantheon’s rankings had been reduced to something far more modest. A minor god’s strength at best. Enough to act. Not enough to make the fools who sealed me regret it. Not yet.

They would have tried to replace me by now — some younger deity shuffled into the role of Judge, draped in borrowed authority they hadn’t earned. The thought was almost amusing. Almost. That would change, in time. First I needed to get out of here.

The seal fractured. Lyra’s power, stretched thin across however many years had passed, finally gave way beneath mine — and the void released me.

I materialized slowly, letting darkness wrap my form like a second skin, reshaping itself to ensure no trace of my presence would be visible to anyone who wasn’t meant to see it. The room I now stood in was small and dim, the only light coming from a single round fixture hanging from the ceiling — a strange, pale thing that hummed faintly, nothing like the torches or braziers I was accustomed to. The world had changed while I slept.

In the center of the room, a young human man knelt on the stone floor, surrounded by a circle of glowing runes that pulsed with each ragged breath he drew. A summoning circle — functional, if imperfect, the lines precise enough to hold so long as he had the magic to sustain them. And he did have magic. I could see it clearly, a dim but genuine flame burning in him. I could also see what it was costing him. The runes fed on that flame directly, and the boy was already pale, trembling slightly at the edges, his body quietly paying a price his determination hadn’t yet acknowledged.

The sight of him stirred something I hadn’t expected. A memory, distant and worn soft at the edges — the first time a mortal had ever summoned me, long ago, in a world that no longer existed in any form I would recognize. I set the feeling aside.

My gaze moved to the small altar resting on a stone slab nearby. Offerings had been laid out carefully — that much was clear from the intention behind their arrangement — but none of them were mine. No black salt. No bones or shed feathers. No obsidian or offerings of decay. Whatever worship had once been directed toward me, it had been scrubbed from the world entirely. The other gods had been thorough, at least.

I let my attention settle on the boy again. To me, any mortal was young — I had existed for eons before most of their civilizations had learned to write — but this one struck me as particularly so. Twenty years, perhaps. Maybe less.

“Why have I been called forth, young mage?” I asked, letting my voice fill the room without effort — low, measured, the kind of tone that didn’t need to be raised to be heard clearly.

The boy’s head snapped up. His eyes found the darkness where I stood, and I watched him swallow whatever fear rose first before it could reach his face.

“M-My family,” he said, his voice steadier than I expected. “Please — I don’t care what deity you are. Just please, help them.”

He was still kneeling. Still holding the circle despite the cost of it.

I regarded him in silence for a moment, long enough that a lesser mortal might have broken under the weight of it. He didn’t. That was worth noting.

Let D.F Wilson know what you thought about this chapter!

Further Recommendations

The Alpha's Exiled Mate (ON HOLD)

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

Read Now
Mystic Wolf

Teresa: The book is well done, brilliant in fact! Z

Read Now
Looking for my King

Patricia: I liked all the action, more detail of types of moves to allow visually involving the reader.Story line including the bi-sexuality is enlightening to find for a change.The graphic details of the fighting keeps the reader involved. The use of communicating between minds and spirits is terrific to see...

Read Now
His Unexpected Luna

kenshop: The more than I read this better this book becomes you just gotta give this book a read to see what’s going on and you will enjoy it.

Read Now
My Blacksmith Savior

apolloavr04: I love it. It's a great story.

Read Now
Bound to the Bear

Mira: Just waw loved every part of tu

Read Now
The Orc's Pet

Glenda Holmes: Good read!

Read Now
Bloodlines

Read4Free16: Fantastic development of characters and story line

Read Now
Marked While We Slept

Vassidor: In the Intro the author mentions this short story being the idea for a full length novel. I say: go for it. It’s a beautiful, empowering story. Very well written with wisdom in dialogues that actually made me cry at several points. Thank you for this lovely piece of writing.

Read Now