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"I was just so confused who are the males and who are the females here. Maybe because I am Asian, and not a native speaker and is not too familiar with the culture in the west. I thought Jordan was male, but it seemed she was a female...and Alex was a...female? Elias was definitely a male...I guess... Names can be changed, and I wished these are clear. The actions seemed to center on the lovemaking of three people (of mixed gender was it)... But I like the descriptions, the way it was done, very professional, and it is nice that it depicts the views and the background of the place."

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