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Review
"The prose was brilliant and poetic. The plot is compelling so far . Prose my be a bit too dense at some points but otherwise for a prologue it's great. Your use of italics really gives it a cinematic feel. "
"The prose was brilliant and poetic. The plot is compelling so far . Prose my be a bit too dense at some points but otherwise for a prologue it's great. Your use of italics really gives it a cinematic feel. "