What is your opinion?
Amusing
"The story starts off right away, with no hesitation. You characters’ introduction is amazing – you have taken the approach of letting the characters introduce themselves alone through their words and actions. I love this approach. The whole story is written in an amusing and entertaining way. The constant danger makes the story dynamic. However, although Patrick and Julie are going through a lot and facing a lot of dangerous situations, your style of writing has made those situations fun to read, even comic at some points. I love this. Overall, the whole story is daring, adventurous and exciting and I have really enjoyed reading it. I would only suggest that you do a bit more editing and proofreading, in order to perfect your story some more."
Liked it!
"This was a really sweet story, somehow. The bickering and bantering between Julie and Patrick was very real and made me smile often. I also enjoyed the descriptions of the landscapes and animals of Africa. I wonder, has the author been there, or have they simply done a lot of research? It is great! One thing I would criticize is the fact that the plot doesn’t really get going until a few chapters in. I would advice the author to already create some suspense earlier on; this will make the reader more engaged. But very well done and good luck!"
