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Aks e Gumnaam

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Summary

​"In the quiet hills of Ooty, everyone has a secret. Mine is the one the world thought died eight years ago." Kanza Murtaza died eight years ago in the ruins of her family home. At least, that is what the world—and her father's killer—believes. Today, she is Hoorain, the quiet, veiled owner of The Golden Crust, a charming bakery nestled in the misty hills of Ooty. By day, she kneads dough and raises her two younger brothers with the grace of her faith. By night, she is Anqa, a ghost in the machine, a pro-hacker who infiltrates the shadows to dismantle the empire of the man who took everything from her. ​But revenge is a complex algorithm. When Zarrar Malik, her childhood fiancé and the son of her greatest enemy, arrives in the hills, the lines between her past and present begin to blur. Zarrar is searching for a memory, unaware that the girl he once loved is now the digital predator hunting his father. ​In a game of encrypted secrets and ancient loyalties, Kanza must navigate a dangerous path. Can she achieve justice without losing her soul to the darkness of revenge? ​A tale of faith, firewalls, and the shadows that linger in the mist of Ooty ​“Language: Urdu with English translations provided for every paragraph.” #Mystery #Thriller #StrongFemaleLead #IslamicFiction #Hacker #Revenge #Ooty #UrduNovel #DarkAcademia.

Status
3mo ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

"Assalamu Alaikum!"

Welcome to the world of 'Aks e Gumnaam.' As a first-time novelist, I am thrilled (and a little bit nervous!) to bring this story to life. Set in the quiet hills of Ooty, this is a tale of hidden reflections and digital shadows. Thank you for giving my words a chance. I’ve provided English translations after every paragraph so we can all experience this journey together. Happy reading!"


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اوٹی  کی ٹھنڈی، بوجھل دھند صنوبر کے درختوں سے لپٹی ہوئی تھی، جیسے کوئی پرانا راز چھپانے کی کوشش کر رہی ہو۔ فجر کا وقت تھا، لیکن بستی ابھی تک گہری نیند میں تھی۔ صرف ایک آواز تھی جو خاموشی کا سینہ چیر رہی تھی—براق کے قدموں کی چاپ۔

The heavy, cold mist of ooty clung to the pine trees like a shroud trying to conceal an ancient secret. It was the hour of Fajr, yet the settlement remained in a deep slumber. There was only one sound piercing the silence—the steady, rhythmic beat of Buraq’s hooves.

کنزا نے لگام ڈھیلی چھوڑی اور ایک لمبی سانس لی۔ لوگ کہتے ہیں کہ اندھیری راتوں میں شیطان نکلتے ہیں، مگر اسے معلوم تھا کہ اصلی اندھیرا تو دھوپ میں چلتے پھرتے چہروں کے پیچھے چھپا ہوتا ہے۔ شیطان تو صرف بہکاتا ہے، لیکن انسان؟ انسان اجاڑ دیتا ہے۔ وہ گھروں کو راکھ کرتا ہے، معصومیت کا قتل کرتا ہے، اور 'محبت' کے نام پر روحوں کو نیلام کر دیتا ہے۔

Kanza loosened the reins and took a long, shaky breath. People say that demons emerge in the dark of night, but she knew better. True darkness hides behind the faces that walk in broad daylight. Satan only misleads, but Man? Man destroys. He turns homes to ash, murders innocence, and auctions off souls in the name of ‘love.’

اس نے اپنے نقاب کو درست کیا اور اپنی جیب سے ایک چھوٹا سا، چمکتا ہوا یو-ایس-بی ڈرائیو (USB) نکالا۔ دنیا میں دو طرح کے لوگ ہوتے ہیں: ایک وہ جو ظلم سہتے ہیں، اور ایک وہ جو ظلم کو 'فارمیٹ' کر دیتے ہیں۔

She adjusted her veil and pulled a small, glinting USB drive from her pocket. There are two types of people in this world: those who endure oppression, and those who ‘Format’ it.

"میں کوئی فرشتہ نہیں ہوں،" اس نے سرگوشی کی۔ "لیکن میں وہ شیطان بھی نہیں جو بے قصوروں کو نشانہ بنائے۔ میں وہ آگ ہوں جو صرف اس کچرے کو جلاتی ہے جسے 'انسانیت کا مطلب بھی نہیں پتا ہے۔"

“I am not an angel,” she whispered. “But I am not the devil who targets the innocent. I am the fire that burns only the trash who doesn't even know the meaning of ‘Humanity.’”

اس کے سامنے لیپ ٹاپ کی سکرین روشن ہوئی، جس کی نیلی روشنی اس کی آنکھوں میں عکس پیدا کر رہی تھی۔ ہر گناہ کا ایک حساب ہوتا ہے، اور کنزا کا 'سسٹم' آج وہی حساب کرنے کے لیے تیار تھا۔

The laptop screen flickered to life before her, its blue light reflecting in her sharp eyes. Every sin has an audit—and Kanza’s ‘System’ was ready to settle the score today.

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