Nice

"You start off slowly, setting the scene and introducing the reader to everything step by step. This is really helpful in the reading process, since you can imagine and comprehend everything and get yourself prepared for the story itself. All of a sudden, it becomes dynamic, thrilling and mysterious. I love that you have written in first person perspective; that always gets to me and makes me not only relate more to the characters, but also feel for your characters and worry about them. You have a really nice style of writing, absorbing and enchanting. I love how the ending is unexpected. A dream. Who would have thought.. This is really nice."