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This is amazing!

"I love the story and the characters! Ethan is the best. I think sometimes how Lilly is written maybe to young for a ten year old in some parts. I love the character development and can't out it down to see what happened to Jen even though I think I know. Punctuation and grammar needs checked but other than that I absolutely love thus story. "

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More please.....just wow

"Oh my gosh you had me from the start, yes it was a slow burn but this will ignite now that her barriers are coming down. This story resonates with me on so many different levels; my Mam and Dad lives ended in hospice care. I had some terrible interactions with horrible men who took advantage of me when I was younger.Your writing style is so good , it paints a very vivid pic. Well done. More chapters please "

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Heartstrings Officially Pulled

"Beautiful story about finding your way home through love and forgiveness. It was easy to connect with the characters as well as the storyline due to my own similar life experiences. Loved this!"

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