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A Really Fun Slow Burn!

"This story hit all the marks for me! I am typically not a huge fan of really sappy romance out the gate and this story remained very true to its intent! This story is definitely a slow burn as promised. But what I love most is being able to see each character on their own, interacting with their environment, school, and other peers without each other. I always think that scenes where the two MCs are doing things without having the other in mind, strengthens a romance because, it allows the reader to understand the character. The author nails that! I loved our female MC's snappy attitude! I like the concept of the rivalry and storylines within school life. My note to the author would be to maybe add a few more details in the later chapters. There is just less text accompanying the dialogue there. All in all, an interesting and fun tale that clearly has only begun the ride! I hope the author continues to write and develop the world of "The World Between Us"."

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