What is your opinion?
Sister
"Please let someone com how d"
Janice and the boys
"Story is so good and can’t wait for the next chapters."
LOVE. THIS
"I love the way the author doesn't give too much away but enough to keep the readers on their toes. It's perf "
Worth it
"The story is great, some typos but otherwise very fun read "
It's was Fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter. 😍
"The story is one of the sexy story that I have read. It better than 50 Shades of Grey. I have read it when it was Fanfiction on Starslibrary and it was called Master of the Universe. This story is way better. I hope it has other books in the series "
Next!
"Why are you always stopped at the good part🙄"
Addictive reading
"A compelling and addictive storyline whilst being a fun and wonderfully erotic read. Please write more soon. I can use my imagination but it’s not the same as reading someone else’s words! "
It is ok
"no plot reall but ok to read"
That was fast 🫤
"Soooo... I was really invested all the way until after the men slept with Janice at her dad's party. Then I would bet money that a different author took over for the final chapters. And then 2 years later with 1 chapter per guy and half a chapter for Calder seems insane. And what the heck happened to Lucians brother after all that back story for him. Maybe I am being greedy again, but the ending after going behind a pay wall was a little disappointing. But I wrote if here instead of as a review since it really is a good story, I personally just hated the last 30 ish chapters! "
Not sure how I feel...
"Oooof. This is a hard story to rate. Let's break it down: Pros: Reverse Harem, wild sex scenes (the mirror room is now my favorite fantasy), gripping/interesting. Cons: The writing is terrible. Some of it sounds extremely immature. "Me" and "I" are almost always used incorrectly. There are some chapters where it slips from first to second person in the same sentence. Tons of typos. The spacing is off for much of the dialogue which makes it hard to follow. A ton of figures of speech are incorrect, which makes the writing sound immature. The plot has a lot of holes. It reads like a super early first draft. But....here's the thing: I drop books FAST when the writing is like this. I have not dropped this one. There's just something about it I have to finish. So, read at your discretion. "
