Short, yet powerful!

"First off, I applaud the author for writing about mental health awareness! It's such a prominent stigma in today's society, and yet, very little is sad or done to help. Thank you, fellow awareness warrior. Second, this story was emotionally powerful in a way that I didn't expect. Yes, the blurb tells us about a struggle, but within these pages, the readers FEEL that struggle alongside poor Kevin. The writing style was gorgeous, very poetic and written in a third-person perspective, which is really hard to pull off! Loved the magical realism of the visitor and the other character (I won't spoil), and also the beautiful, artistic ending. Critique-wise, I would've liked to see maybe a 'certain' spirit visiting Kevin as he's coming to terms with things. Perhaps as a baby bunny or something that reminds him of her? That's just a personal thing though, overall five stars! Good job, Kleo!"