Not as good as bad fruit but still good!

"Bad things : way too many descriptions for a short story and it had one s**t witch was unnecessary it would be okay if it was necessary and only one s**t? if it got published it could have been a kids book. good things: felt good I’m not a very patient reader but I read through this like seriously sometimes I pull out book and can’t get through even the first page I don’t know what was good about it it just was."