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A baby before goodbye

"Lovely story"

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A Baby Before Goodbye

"Loved this story .The characters were believable. I felt all the pain /tears /fears they had .I couldn’t wait to read the next chapter . I read the book in one go so interesting . Thank you for sharing your story. ❤️"

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A baby before goodbye

"I loved the story. It was very emotional. I was hurt by her leaving. I was upset when he found her then it turned to worried. Hurt again when he had to choose her or the baby. My emotional grip felt everything the character was feeling when they brought the baby out and not her. The accident brough5 suspense of will he remember and the grandmother character was spot on. But the love when he hose her and the baby was perfect to when he asked her to marry him. Now yes I believe a little bit about what happened at the wedding with the mom and dad would have completed it but the overall book was great ."

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Great story

"Definitely worth recommending."

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A Baby Before Goodbye

"Excellent short story. Definitely a page turner. Highly recommend this book to read."

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A Baby Before Goodbye

"I wish the story was longer 😪 I loved every single chapter "

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Cute short story!

"Well written with a lot of emotion packed into it! Highly recommend! Fantastic job author! "

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Love vs obligation

"Short and sweet. Well not exactly sweet ... lots of tears. Loved the story. Not going to give anything away ... read it 😁"

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Wealth and love do not always mix

"I’m sure stories like this happen in lots of wealthy families where providence matters more than love. Most chapters are read waiting for something to click and change. I am happy for the ending but the story leaves a sad lingering unsatisfying... emotional void "

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💜💜💜💜

"This story just should stole my heart!! "

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Emotional wake up

"Sometimes not the easy choice is the easiest, and sometimes you need to believe what your heart tells you. Life is too short and emotions are too complex, but when you find The One you have to stick to this person no matter what. This book tell you exactly this. Life can be hard, it can put obstacles in front of you in many forms, but at the end you must make the last decision whether you're brave enough to grab the best thing in your life or you miss the your chance to be happy. The author made a wonderful job, when she created this book, the emotional pressure was absolutely there and if you read this book you'll feel all of the ups and downs through her story."

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Sweet Second Chance Story

"Good plot line that touches the heart. Would have liked more development of storyline. Everything felt rushed... It felt like I was 'reading' instead of 'feeling' what was happening. However, I loved how the author didn't throw in filler copy, especially of detailed open door bedroom scenes. It did need to dig deeper into character thoughts and feelings. Needs more character depth and needs to show/reveal more than a simple 'I'm Sorry and All Is Well'. Charlotte.... we know little about her except she agreed to marry James. James' Parents.... need exposed to the public. That would really hurt their pride. Need to know more than their simple 'we were wrong' statement. What made them realize their behavior was out of line? Did the chickens come home to roost, so to speak? Wedding Confession ... chapter definitely needs more depth showing the reactions and emotions of all the 'guilty' (don't want to say too much as I don't want to give spoilers). I read all 25 chapters....not 24 like noted above"

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