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What a lovely short novel

"It was a pleasure to read. The plot is very light, but the author touches each step with a natural and realistic description that makes it easy to identify with the main character. "

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Very Nice

"Loved it , felt very real , not the typical straightforward infatuation love ever after story, it was very realistic and portrayed FMC navigating through life at her own pace. The writing style is such that you either love it or hate and I absolutely love it, it allows you think about the different paths that the characters take as facts not emotionally . Great piece author, thank you ❤️."

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Beautiful work

"Beautiful story, beautiful writing style. I love how the author always portrays leading female with strength. Also likes how the intimate seems described with seldom words but with amazing feelings"

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I couldn’t put it down

"I loved the story line. I loved the strength of the characters but I can’t decide if I liked the fact that so few words were spoken. I had a really hard time reading it without proper punctuation (quotes namely). "

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Great

"The way this story handles its darker themes is impressive. Nothing feels gratuitous, nothing feels sanitized — it's handled with exactly the right amount of honesty and care."

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Sous son toit

"J'apprécie vraiment cette histoire aux nombreux rebondissements. Les personnages sont très justes et attachants. La qualité de l'écriture augmente le plaisir de la lecture. Bravo."

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Beautiful

"So beautifully written and intimate in a way that brings back old school love "

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You go, Lara!

"Engaging story, I love the main character!!!"

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