What is your opinion?
Work in Progress...
"I love the story so far, but the grammar and sentence construction, needs work. Also lots of spelling mistakes, and names for characters get mixed up. But so far the story line is keeping me engaged. "
"I love the story so far, but the grammar and sentence construction, needs work. Also lots of spelling mistakes, and names for characters get mixed up. But so far the story line is keeping me engaged. "