Nice

"The story starts off with a beautiful description. Since I am a snow enthusiast, your description got me to read more. And I was not sorry that I did read more. This is a very nice beginning for a story, an interesting and enjoyable scene setting. I have really enjoyed reading this and I hope that you will write more soon. You have nice narratives and beautiful descriptions and the idea behind this whole story is amazing. You have a nice style of writing, which enthralls you. In my opinion, it has great potential and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work."