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I loved it

"I loved this book it was so good no grammatical errors and I think there should be a sequel "

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Love it!

"Rae is an easy to like character and I love that she stands up for herself"

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Too beautiful for the alpha

"Finished it in a day and half such a good book wish there was more or a spin-off"

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Alpha James and Rae

"I like reading it and can seem to stop. I'm intrigued by the plot, not too romantic or sexual explicit. Also that main character suffers supposedly depression. Have read a lot but haven't encountered the topic before."

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Too beautiful for the Alpha

"This Book was wonderful! I loved it so much! I love the writers style and ...Absolutely love this bookā¤"

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Just great!!!

"This was a great story...binged read it...and loved every moment!"

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Mrs

"My emotions have been all over the place. She needs to claim her man. "

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1st review :) loved the story. Gutted when I read epilogue. X thank you

"Twist and turns. Just like life. Great read, not sure how to take the end. Read other comments. Let's hope it was what she thought she heard :) "

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Good

"This a nice unique book. It didn't follow the same plot as every other book. There was very good character development."

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Too Beautiful For The Alpha

"A great story but confusing at the end making it feel incomplete. Well written and well worth reading "

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The pain of my heart

"Omfg where do I beginšŸ˜I love Rae but I kinda hated James In the first few chapters, but now I love them both, I have you for the ending tho😭JULIANA, are you trying to torture us, I love your book, do more! Ill be your biggest fanšŸ“–šŸ˜šŸ˜­"

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Too Beautiful for the Alpha

"Loved this book!! Confused by the last part of James saying ā€œI love you too Julianaā€. Would of been nice to share their first experience together of Rae losing her virginity, that should of been a big moment for her."

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Great read

"I didn't want it to end. And why did he use his mother's name in the end"

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Rae is a lot & I love her!

"this was definitely a different take on the whole werewolf mate story I don’t want to give anything away but I feel like we all can relate a bit to Rae internal struggles."

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Penny brewer

"Nice read but the way this ended makes me think there is another story"

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To Beautifull foe the Alpha.

"Wonderfull book. Excelent plot. "

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Too beautiful for the Alpha

"The story really stir my feelings. The internal struggle is real. Some may looked Rae as weak, but we all are. She did have issues with self-esteem mostly in the beginning but she also not afraid to speak up and fight for it. Her feelings are valid. There are times I felt like hugging Rae, and calm her down. Great story, I would say quite different with other werewolf stories I read. The intense monologue really gets me. Thanks author for writing good story. Keep it up."

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LOVED IT!!

"I LOVED THIS STORY!! "

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Too Beautiful For the Alpha

"This was a very entertaining book, but it was rather triggering in some parts. I still liked it, and the diary entries were very interesting. Overall, I think this wasn’t a waste of time and I enjoyed it immensely "

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Too Beautiful For The Alpha

"Awesome story! Wish it was longer—delving further into her/his childhoods & their parents stories. "

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