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I'm hooked

"I was a little apprehensive, not gunna lie, when it came to reading this book. Not sure why I was but I settled on reading a couple chapters to see if it grabbed my attention or not, and boy did it not disappoint. I love the plot, it different and I like that a lot. I love the characters, they all have depth and are made of unique stuff. The only thing I'm having issues with is the lack of some words in the sentences or the misspelling of other words here and there. Other then that I love this book and can't wait to finish and move on to the second part of this story. 💙"

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Obscure (Borderlines, Book One)

"Oh WoW!! Just WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY!! Everything about it - I LOVE!! AMAZING!! "

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Borderline

"Very good story, can't wait for the next Book... left me with my mouth wide open"

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Obscure

"Excellent book"

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Where are the sequels

"All these great stories that just stop on cliffhangers with no sequels "

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WOW

"This is an astonishing beginning. I am amazed. The blurb grasped my attention and I started reading the story. I was astounded by its complexity and the way it is mysterious. Your descriptions are amazing, so vivid. I could picture the “hospital” and all the people in there. I could even hear their thoughts even though you haven’t actually written them down. This is what a great style of writing does to the reader. Not everything has to be written down. But, you can see and feel everything. You are a great writer and I have great expectations out of this story. I cannot wait to read the rest."

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