What is your opinion?
Cold Shivers At The End
"Well wriiten suspense that will leave the readers with cold shivers at the end. Simple yet dramatic build up. Highly recommend for those who love suspense and subtle horror."
Scary
"This story seems kind of familiar to me. That is, the idea of murdering the children for food, it is as if I have already read this somewhere. But, nevertheless, the story left a particular impact on me. It is mysterious and scary so far, just what a horror story should be in the first place. I am curious to see what Edward is going to do and how he is going to react and cope with the fact that his children were killed. By making him take a knife at the end of the chapter, you leave the story with a cliffhanger and hint at certain possibilities at the same time. I liked that. Keep up the good work."
